Can you help?

8 Responses

1. Pro Max Fellmuth

   Hello Dribbble!

   This is the first time I really need your help.
   Somehow I got stuck with this design and I have no clue how to make a beauty out of it. I'll keep this shot up for 24h. Can you give me some feedback or rebound it?

   Every help is much appreciated!

   4 months ago

2. Christoph Rauscher

   I don't really see your problem with it? It looks clean and neat! What I don't get is the extra font style on "people". Have you ever tried Museo Sans fot the small type? Might work a bit better.
   Another thing: You could try to make the icons more equal (size, weight, …). Now, the clock is much heavier than the people, for example.

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   4 months ago

3. Pro Max Fellmuth

   Wow, thanks Christoph!

   It's more like that I'm having problems with the space/layout but that's a good tip anyway! :D

   4 months ago

4. Pro Reimar Servas

   To be honest, this really could be improved. I would go for a two-col layout (main col plus smaller sidebar). A huge improvement would be that the main text/article gets a comfortable width to improve readability (shorter lines). Additionally, you have more control over weighting the content and directing the visitor’s view when you use two columns. I think : )

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   4 months ago

5. Pro Max Fellmuth

   @themizwo:
   imo the ~90 chars per line are too much. either ++ on font size or go multicolumn. also increase line spacing. greetings.

   4 months ago

6. Pro Max Fellmuth

   Thank you Reimar, you are so totally right! :)

   4 months ago

7. Kristina Schneider

   What Christoph says. Looking very good already, but some tweaking in the details to be done (adjust icons, shorter lines).
   Also, why are border radius and box shadow on the white box different from the image above?
   And Museo is is a very good font of course, but probably the web’s most overused font, too :P
   No show us the update!

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   4 months ago

8. Pro Max Fellmuth

   Here it is: http://cl.ly/DZ9a ;p

   A more detailed version will come later :)

   Thank you!

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   4 months ago