Wait... Two nitpicks: Could you round the outside corner with a larger radius to make the curve uniform? Feels a little pointy. I might also suggest a different font for the "NO. 002064" It feels a little out of place for me. Maybe you could find (or make) something that looks like a moveable stamp (e.g. one of those stamps that you can change the date on by rotating the rubber)? You've got all these nice sans faces in it. Might be nice to keep it consistent.
Very stylish. Love the 1927. You have broken out of the box in all the right ways. Only thing I can think to consider is the typeface for "No. 002064". While I like the typeface itself, I wonder if it's a bit too formal or polished for the classic, handmade, American grunge aesthetic you've established for the rest of the tag. Just something to think about :)
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4 months ago
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Jari Sanders
Teach me! ;-)
4 months ago
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Frantisek Kusovsky
pretty
4 months ago
So perfect! Love how you've placed 1927.
4 months ago
Yes. Yes. A thousand times, YES.
Wait... Two nitpicks: Could you round the outside corner with a larger radius to make the curve uniform? Feels a little pointy. I might also suggest a different font for the "NO. 002064" It feels a little out of place for me. Maybe you could find (or make) something that looks like a moveable stamp (e.g. one of those stamps that you can change the date on by rotating the rubber)? You've got all these nice sans faces in it. Might be nice to keep it consistent.
Really, REALLY like the overall look.
4 months ago
Interesting idea, will try that out. Thanks Jim!
I also just realized it says 'No.' two times.... oops!
4 months ago
Sex to my eyes.
4 months ago
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Adam Butler
Very stylish. Love the 1927. You have broken out of the box in all the right ways. Only thing I can think to consider is the typeface for "No. 002064". While I like the typeface itself, I wonder if it's a bit too formal or polished for the classic, handmade, American grunge aesthetic you've established for the rest of the tag. Just something to think about :)
Great job here, Rich.
4 months ago
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Caleb Royce Lummer
you, sir, are talented as hell.
4 months ago