Agree with Simon, I think it looks a bit dark and inconsistent (regarding the style of the metal + leather + lens + glass + stripes in the background). I really like the different elemets individually though!
Never have much criticism for you Jeff, you do fantastic work. However, I have to agree with statements above, the whole thing seems a bit cluttered and messy. It's a bit dark, I don't feel like the elements all POP the way they should. I love the use of color, but the color would be better if the rest of the icon showed it off better.
Thanks for the positive feedback! I made some minor tweaks. Against the light Dribbble page this looks really dark, but when on a black background it looks about right.
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Jeff Broderick
A personal project is on it's way. This one has been fun to make!
4 months ago
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Marco D'Ascenzo
mamma, like the color stripes in the lens... awesome!
4 months ago
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Guillaume Gaubert
Nice reflection! I'm wondering for what it is.
4 months ago
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Filip Raatz | Pixel Kammer
Every week a new project... sleeping is not one of your favorites, am i right ? ;)
4 months ago
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AndyTheJoker
:O
4 months ago
Top stuff Jeff. Highlights are cool, reflections and flare are superb.
4 months ago
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Waseem Arshad
awesome
4 months ago
instagram redesign i presume?
4 months ago
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Ines Gamler
fantastic!
4 months ago
Personally I think it's too messy and too dark, but nice reflections!
4 months ago
Fap fap fap
4 months ago
Agree with Simon, I think it looks a bit dark and inconsistent (regarding the style of the metal + leather + lens + glass + stripes in the background). I really like the different elemets individually though!
4 months ago
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Jake Rocheleau
no hesitation, no surrender
4 months ago
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Steve Beaulieu
Never have much criticism for you Jeff, you do fantastic work. However, I have to agree with statements above, the whole thing seems a bit cluttered and messy. It's a bit dark, I don't feel like the elements all POP the way they should. I love the use of color, but the color would be better if the rest of the icon showed it off better.
4 months ago
Rebound
Something Is Coming...rebound....
by Jeff Broderick
Thanks for the positive feedback! I made some minor tweaks. Against the light Dribbble page this looks really dark, but when on a black background it looks about right.
Check out the attachment for a larger shot.
What do you think?
4 months ago