Trav-1

Middle Name Vectors

7 Responses

  1. Pro Trav-1 Travis Fleck

    Thanks all and thanks for the feedback Claire. I did quite a bit of tweaking. Not sure if it is there or not. I've been looking at it for a while now.

    4 months ago

  2. Pro Thumb80 Claire Coullon

    Looks terrific! Really love that 'y', the straight descender goes so well with the overall feel of the letterforms. I also really like your update removing the little stroke that was crossing over the 'L' stem - it fits much nicer next to the 'C'. The spacing there looks good too, although could maybe be a little closer still? Anyway looks really good, I love seeing the transition from the sketch.

    4 months ago

  3. Pro Seanwes-typographer Sean McCabe

    Looks great! Agree that the 'layton' could move just a tad closer to the 'C'. Also, the stroke width of the 'n' feels a touch heavy. Overall very nice!

    4 months ago

  4. Pro Trav-1 Travis Fleck

    Thanks! The 'n' is a bit big boned. The 'C' has been giving me trouble too.

    4 months ago

  5. Pro Logobud2- Jens Obel

    I absolutely love the chunky "N" :D Maybe the top of the "C" could be a bit thicker?

    4 months ago

  6. Racing Ray Stone

    Awesome! Just to add more questions - could the 'l' and the 'a' be smidgen bigger?

    4 months ago

  7. Pro Trav-1 Travis Fleck

    I think you are right Ray.

    4 months ago

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