Your work is awesome. This is looking great, the only thing that bugs me are the lines and dots going behind the type. Wonder if you can cut the lines to end slightly before the type and perhaps delete that dot inside the first T.
Looks fantastic. I do agree that the stuff running behind "TIPTOP" creates a few awkward places. In particular, the positioning of the edge of the ribbon is causing me to read this as "TIRTOP" at first glance.
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David Cran
Tasty again.
over 1 year ago
Beautiful.
The one of the left works really well. "TIPTOP" gets a little hard to read for me on the right one.
over 1 year ago
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Jeremy Richie
Love these!
over 1 year ago
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Jon Stapp | atomicvibe
YESSSSS! This is looking tip-top. Literally, figuratively, and awesomely.
over 1 year ago
Your work is awesome. This is looking great, the only thing that bugs me are the lines and dots going behind the type. Wonder if you can cut the lines to end slightly before the type and perhaps delete that dot inside the first T.
over 1 year ago
Looks fantastic. I do agree that the stuff running behind "TIPTOP" creates a few awkward places. In particular, the positioning of the edge of the ribbon is causing me to read this as "TIRTOP" at first glance.
over 1 year ago
awesome...just make sure no one gets confused and reads tirtop
over 1 year ago
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Von Glitschka
Three Thumbs Up!
over 1 year ago
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Yael Miller
Wow. I really like this. I see the R that people are calling out here, but otherwise, it's a beautifully structured seal-style mark.
about 1 year ago