I think you could probably move the elbow further down and round on the left (still following the nice curve you have). It will be interesting to see how you add type to this as it's quite a specific and heavy form, perhaps it should be worked as a complete composition, rather than incremental steps?
Also, I think, at this angle you would see both pairs of incisors.
I love this as always, the only change Id do is the football and the right hand. It would be a bit nicer if the monkey would hold the ball as a center before the snap.
my only qualm is his right foot. It might be nice to see another incisor too but it also makes it look like hes got that billy idol sneer. Super solid work man, Way nice!
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Work in progress. Thank you very much for opinions and comments.)
over 1 year ago
for me is perfect!
over 1 year ago
NOT ANOTHER STROKE. . . it is perfect
over 1 year ago
Thanks Manuel and Luke
over 1 year ago
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Rich Baird
I think you could probably move the elbow further down and round on the left (still following the nice curve you have). It will be interesting to see how you add type to this as it's quite a specific and heavy form, perhaps it should be worked as a complete composition, rather than incremental steps?
Also, I think, at this angle you would see both pairs of incisors.
over 1 year ago
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Ran Shenberger
I love it!
over 1 year ago
Thanks guys. Above the type I had not thought of.
over 1 year ago
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Gyula Nemeth
I love this as always, the only change Id do is the football and the right hand. It would be a bit nicer if the monkey would hold the ball as a center before the snap.
over 1 year ago
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Kevin Burr
Looks great just as is. The face is really nice.
over 1 year ago
Great dynamic. Very cool!
over 1 year ago
my only qualm is his right foot. It might be nice to see another incisor too but it also makes it look like hes got that billy idol sneer. Super solid work man, Way nice!
over 1 year ago
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Jeremiah Britton
really like this
over 1 year ago
Nice, is this American football or Rugby?
over 1 year ago
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Dan Lehman
solid logo. this is my favorite from what you've posted on dribbble
over 1 year ago
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James Graves
so great
over 1 year ago
super flow
about 1 year ago
Thanks guys.
about 1 year ago