Hey fellas, the intention with this mark is not to be obvious, so I hope you understand the concept behind it, but not to fast. Feedback is VERY appreciated in this case, and will help if you comment before you see the attachment. :D
Well, I saw a kiwi slice right away. Then, based on Prekesh's comment, I started to see the contained explosion. I looked at the attachment, and, if the image is also supposed to be a contained explosion, I think I get the association, but I'm not positive. I won't mention what I think it means, since it seems like you want people to study this shot first and THEN look at the attachment for meaning.
Now, if the obvious image here is supposed to be a kiwi slice, I might ask, "Why a kiwi slice?" It's very cool, and is definitely a different fruit than one usually expects from logos that depict fruits, but is there some specific reason you chose that particular fruit.
At any rate, I think the icon is beautifully rendered. The type lockup is a little plain in comparison, but it looks like a government or non-profit program, and those types typically don't go for super-creative type executions. So the simple type you have may be ok for this purpose.
My associations of this:
kiwi, explosion, emotions, fresh, and the rising spray.
I am with the horizontal version of this.
Sign looks great, Breno. And I think that it is suitable for the name of project. Because all of the associations that I have when viewing, exactly anti obesity :)
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Breno Bitencourt
Hey fellas, the intention with this mark is not to be obvious, so I hope you understand the concept behind it, but not to fast. Feedback is VERY appreciated in this case, and will help if you comment before you see the attachment. :D
over 1 year ago
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Prekesh Chavda
Is it supposed to be like an explosion? being contained maybe? That's what I thought instantly... and of course watermelon
over 1 year ago
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Nathan Walker
I believe it's a kiwi. I like the mark, but I have a hard time making a connection without the name.
over 1 year ago
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Jon Stapp | atomicvibe
Well, I saw a kiwi slice right away. Then, based on Prekesh's comment, I started to see the contained explosion. I looked at the attachment, and, if the image is also supposed to be a contained explosion, I think I get the association, but I'm not positive. I won't mention what I think it means, since it seems like you want people to study this shot first and THEN look at the attachment for meaning.
Now, if the obvious image here is supposed to be a kiwi slice, I might ask, "Why a kiwi slice?" It's very cool, and is definitely a different fruit than one usually expects from logos that depict fruits, but is there some specific reason you chose that particular fruit.
At any rate, I think the icon is beautifully rendered. The type lockup is a little plain in comparison, but it looks like a government or non-profit program, and those types typically don't go for super-creative type executions. So the simple type you have may be ok for this purpose.
over 1 year ago
My associations of this:
kiwi, explosion, emotions, fresh, and the rising spray.
I am with the horizontal version of this.
Sign looks great, Breno. And I think that it is suitable for the name of project. Because all of the associations that I have when viewing, exactly anti obesity :)
over 1 year ago
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Shaun Smylski
Love Kiwi's
over 1 year ago
Nice love kiwi too.
over 1 year ago
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Inka Mathew
I see kiwi right away. I don't see the connection with fighting obesity though, although I know that Kiwi is a super food.
over 1 year ago
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Josh Hayes
Looks tasty!!!
over 1 year ago
kiwi :p
over 1 year ago
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Prekesh Chavda
Oh snap! I didn't think of Kiwi haha, *shouldn't be up at 4am browsing dribbble
over 1 year ago
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saurabhj
kiwi first then obesity... but still scratching my head to find a connection... is it just nature element?
over 1 year ago
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Birgit Zimmermann
yummy!
over 1 year ago
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Sean O'Grady
I haven't read the above comments as yet so here goes:
Melon/ kiwi /kidney
over 1 year ago
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Jovan Petrić
Breast cancer awareness?
over 1 year ago
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Mike Heitzke
I love kiwi. The shape has some strange 'bloat' to it. A kiwi that is fattening?
over 1 year ago
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Kevin Burr
Well, I'm a little off my rocker today, so I see a bunch of little insects/rodents scurrying from a house that's just been fumigated.
over 1 year ago
I see a Kiwi and the sun rising...
over 1 year ago
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Ahmed Chergaoui
EAT ALL THE KIWIS!!
over 1 year ago
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willharding
Definitely saw Kiwi before anything else but the color is huge in delivering that. Single color I imagine this would be read: explosion.
over 1 year ago
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Andres Sanchez
willharding brings a good point, on color I see a kiwi but in b/w it looks like an explosion or a sunrise to me.
over 1 year ago
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Nemanja Jovanovic aka Frac...
looks like kiwi explosion kinda,love it!
over 1 year ago