I like it a ton Evan! What if the blue overlapped the orange on one of the connections. Would feel a little more like they were equal. Does that make sense?
First thing I thought was maybe the contrast in thickness between inner design and outer circle is to too much? The inner design gets lost and feels very delicate compared to the outer thickness.
Love the pattern of the inside waves, and the colors... but there feels like a disconnect between the subtlety and grace of the waves to the thick straightforwardness of the circle. Perhaps integrating the two more?
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Evan Huwa
Working on a mark for an energy water related consortium. Thoughts?
5 months ago
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Matt Scribner
I like it a ton Evan! What if the blue overlapped the orange on one of the connections. Would feel a little more like they were equal. Does that make sense?
5 months ago
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Brian Lindstrom
I like the movement inside the circle.
First thing I thought was maybe the contrast in thickness between inner design and outer circle is to too much? The inner design gets lost and feels very delicate compared to the outer thickness.
Make sense, or just useless babble? :)
5 months ago
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Evan Huwa
Yeah, all making sense guys. I'll keep tweaking for sure.
5 months ago
Love the pattern of the inside waves, and the colors... but there feels like a disconnect between the subtlety and grace of the waves to the thick straightforwardness of the circle. Perhaps integrating the two more?
5 months ago
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Evan Huwa
I hear ya Joseph. I have made the containing shape smaller and it has helped drastically.
5 months ago