Keep It Close 2

12 Responses

1. Pro Nick Agin

   To Script, Or Not To Script?

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   5 months ago

2. Pro Dillon James Sherman

   I like it with the script. I think the contrast of the friendly type use on "keep a secret" makes the last part even more impactful. Plus, it just looks better!

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   5 months ago

3. Adam Grason

   Insane

   5 months ago

4. Pro Emir Ayouni | Growcase

   Tough choice.

   Love both of them.

   Dillon makes a good point tho.

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   5 months ago

5. Pro Ethan Geyer

   yeah, this is it.

   5 months ago

6. Pro Nick Slater

   Love them both

   5 months ago

7. Pro Michael Smith

   I vote no script. It looses some of its edge to me.

   5 months ago

8. Pro Chris Beaumont

   loving the sinister impact after the innocent script, I prefer this version

   5 months ago

9. Pro Luke Bott

   I dig no script. to me it feels foreign to the rest of the design. thats just my thoughts tho.

   5 months ago

10. Pro Ryan Wheaton

    That's tough. I really like how the script fits in there, but like mentioned above the sans serif gives more of an edge on the message

    5 months ago

11. Pro Nick Agin

    Yeah, maybe a more hardass script, or back to the block

    5 months ago

12. Pro Jon Stapp

    I agree with Dillon up there^. Script gets my vote. It bends perception, because it's pretty and sweet, and it's a nice optical pause just before delivering that sinister punchline.

    But beyond the script/no script debate, I gotta say that not only do I love the concept here, but the execution is superb. Really well done.

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    5 months ago