A Digital Critique Experiment

7 Responses

1. Pro Jonathan Bowden

   I really love what the amazing team @invisionapp are up to, and I've been using their prototype tool for a few weeks now. It's amazing. It really is. You can take static comps, and quickly turn them into a clickable prototype in minutes.

   I've been using it for both office work, as well as freelance, both mobile apps and "desktop" sites, and it does really well for both. I've also used it to collaborate with both coworkers and client through it's web and mobile interface.

   So I wanted to run a little experiment, and hook the awesomeness of invision up to the amazing community of dribbble. So whether you have just a few moments, or 5 minutes to peruse through the link, I'd love to have you guys give me a critique of the work so far. Note, it's currently about 50 / 50 comps and wireframes. I'm mostly looking for critique on the comps.

   Thanks!

   http://invis.io/9S1JIP73

   5 months ago

2. Pro Brendan Pittman

   digging the comps dude, very clean. i gave you some feedback, i think i used invision correctly - i'll have to start using it for my personal work. thanks for sharing.

   5 months ago

3. elyse holladay

   Mel's Meals! I've heard they're supposed to be great. That is all :)

   5 months ago

4. Pro TJ Taylor

   Like the comps, one element to think about is the "Ask a Question" on the "Contact Dietician" modal. I see why it's positioned to the right, as a child of the radio button, but that alignment feels off. I would either justify it as well, or opt to use some javascript / CSS to reveal it once that radio is selected.

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   5 months ago

5. Pro Jonathan Bowden

   Good comment, thanks Tj!

   5 months ago

6. Pro Paul Russo

   Looking great man, you should see if you can use google maps for the delivery area map. Theres some pretty cool customizations you can do with it. I'm already sold on using Mel's.

   5 months ago

7. Pro Jonathan Bowden

   Paul, I will definitely look into this. I know matthew smith has done some good work for zaarly with this. Thanks for the nudge to push this further! And yeah, let me know what you think of the meals.

   5 months ago