The shine on the corners of the red box is a bit too bright in my opinion. I'm guessing the content of the box is more important than the actual box/frame? Although it's a very pretty box ;)
Looking good!
Beautiful work as always. As others have said, I'd consider brightening up the front 'card' a little and reducing the vividness of the gradients on the box slightly, to shift attention to the contents rather than the container.
Nice idea. The perspective is a little confusing (the box seems to be at a different angle than the cards?) I suppose the cards could be sitting at an angle within the box (rather than 90° vertically), however their relative widths are still off (they wouldn't reduce in width as drastically & consistently as in this version)…
Nice. I would suggest perhaps the cards need to appear above the back the same height as they do in relation to the front, if that makes sense? I quite like the intensity - makes it ping :)
Regarding the shine, you might need to play with it for low and high resolution versions. Maybe try adding it to your home screen to get a more accurate sense of it. Great work!
This is really nice. Love the colorful cards in there instead of them all being white. Only thing I'd change is perhaps the corner radii are a bit off.
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App icon in progress, anything you feel could be improved upon?
over 1 year ago
Pro
Christophe Tauziet
Love it ! Maybe your gradients on the front are too intense. But it's close to perfection :)
over 1 year ago
Pro
Atle Mo
The shine on the corners of the red box is a bit too bright in my opinion. I'm guessing the content of the box is more important than the actual box/frame? Although it's a very pretty box ;)
Looking good!
over 1 year ago
I'm glad you said that Christophe, I've been pondering the same. Will have a look at what it's like toned down.
over 1 year ago
Beautiful work as always. As others have said, I'd consider brightening up the front 'card' a little and reducing the vividness of the gradients on the box slightly, to shift attention to the contents rather than the container.
over 1 year ago
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Window
by Richard Das
Nice idea. The perspective is a little confusing (the box seems to be at a different angle than the cards?) I suppose the cards could be sitting at an angle within the box (rather than 90° vertically), however their relative widths are still off (they wouldn't reduce in width as drastically & consistently as in this version)…
over 1 year ago
Pretty!
Agree about the shine being a bit strong.
Perspective of box vs cards looks a little weird to me, although I see you're working to constraint on icon-shape.
over 1 year ago
Pro
Kev Adamson
Nice. I would suggest perhaps the cards need to appear above the back the same height as they do in relation to the front, if that makes sense? I quite like the intensity - makes it ping :)
over 1 year ago
Pro
Jacob Payne
This looks cool. I agree with people above that the gradient feels quite strong, may not render as well at normal app size.
Also maybe the '+' is cutting into the profile icon a little too much but it looks okay as is. Look forward to seeing the final version!
over 1 year ago
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Icon for Business Card App
by Richard Das
Playing with the arrangement/perspective of the cards inside the box.
over 1 year ago
For me it feels like the whole card holder is a bit too deep! AWesome work!
over 1 year ago
In real terms, it is too deep, but I'm banking on the fact that if you could see inside it, there would be a platform for the cards to sit on ;)
over 1 year ago
Regarding the shine, you might need to play with it for low and high resolution versions. Maybe try adding it to your home screen to get a more accurate sense of it. Great work!
over 1 year ago
Pro
Hugo França
Great icon Sarah! Maybe you could reduce the number of cards and increase the size.
over 1 year ago
Pro
matt rossi
looking good, and great idea!
over 1 year ago
I would reduce the tone on the red-ish gradient, but other than that, it's a great logo and a unique idea!
over 1 year ago
Pro
Chuck Mallott
This is really nice. Love the colorful cards in there instead of them all being white. Only thing I'd change is perhaps the corner radii are a bit off.
http://oaktreecreative.com/entries/setting-a-proper-corner-radius/
For some reason the top left and bottom left seem different from the ones on the right. Could just be an illusion, though.
Love the idea of a business card app, too! :)
over 1 year ago
I love it!!
over 1 year ago
great job!! :)
8 months ago