Loving the new mark and the changes look great, Haziq. :) I'd suggest shrinking the "Web & UI Designer" text a tad and enlarging the "Haziq Mir" text a little more to put some emphasis on your name. Gotta make sure viewers get your name stuck in their head ;)
Really, really nice! I wasn't sure about you moving away from your old brand - but I'm on-board with it now. You have my blessings ;p
Although I agree with Cole, the spacing above and below your name should be consistent with the spacing between your name and the ribbon (i.e. move the name a bit to the right).
@Haziq Of course you can do both. But personally, I have seen way too many vintage-ish flags/ribbons like the one you designed. Again, as I said, the quality of your design is impressive, but IMO it's not quite unique enough. It's what most designers are doing now.
I think you should remove that darker red part on the ribbon http://cl.ly/D7SO because by the looks of this screenshot, there's no perspective elsewhere on the site
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Nearing completion and I'm so excited about this!
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over 1 year ago
Lookin hot
over 1 year ago
Awesome! The shading is fantastic! Just a few things I would change:
1. Add more space in between the ribbon and "Haziq Mir, Web & UI Designer."
2. Like I mentioned on Twitter, you should move the top on the "M" up a bit.
Just my 2¢ :)
over 1 year ago
Loving the new mark and the changes look great, Haziq. :) I'd suggest shrinking the "Web & UI Designer" text a tad and enlarging the "Haziq Mir" text a little more to put some emphasis on your name. Gotta make sure viewers get your name stuck in their head ;)
over 1 year ago
nice work :)
over 1 year ago
Really, really nice! I wasn't sure about you moving away from your old brand - but I'm on-board with it now. You have my blessings ;p
Although I agree with Cole, the spacing above and below your name should be consistent with the spacing between your name and the ribbon (i.e. move the name a bit to the right).
over 1 year ago
Perfect pixels! Great work.
over 1 year ago
Incredible work Haziq. Love it
over 1 year ago
The ribbon is orgasmic.
over 1 year ago
Execution: great. Originality: mehh.. Choose which one you want to strike potential clients with.
over 1 year ago
@Christopher
Why not both?!
over 1 year ago
Great work with the logotype, love it)
over 1 year ago
Great detail on this. Can't wait to see the full thing.
over 1 year ago
Nice work on the logo/ribbon.. Love the detail and textures :)
over 1 year ago
How did I miss this shot! Great work my friend! :)
over 1 year ago
Thank you, everyone. Appreciate your comments! :)
over 1 year ago
Liking those textures!
over 1 year ago
@Haziq Of course you can do both. But personally, I have seen way too many vintage-ish flags/ribbons like the one you designed. Again, as I said, the quality of your design is impressive, but IMO it's not quite unique enough. It's what most designers are doing now.
over 1 year ago
Really like the texture.
over 1 year ago
I would loose the name and just go with the logo. You can say who you are in the headline below.
over 1 year ago
I think you should remove that darker red part on the ribbon http://cl.ly/D7SO because by the looks of this screenshot, there's no perspective elsewhere on the site
over 1 year ago
I like your logo dude. Good stuff.
Also loving the texture work you have there. Well done.
over 1 year ago
super impressive bro i love the contrast
over 1 year ago
Thank you everyone for the nice comments!
@Bruno
Did that :)
@Vincent
I am trying to add perspective in other areas of the design right now ;)
over 1 year ago
Love the logo - H & M combined :)
over 1 year ago