9 Responses

  1. Pro Evan Huwa Evan Huwa

    A different direction for the same project. Larger version attached with text.

    Let me know your thoughts.

    over 1 year ago

  2. Jeff Close Jeff Close

    I like the first one MUCH better. This one looks like a logo you'd find on snowboarding gear (still executed well though)

    over 1 year ago

  3. Steve Silvas Steve Silvas

    over 1 year ago

  4. Pro Evan Huwa Evan Huwa

    Hey Steve, I knew going in to this that there would be a lot of similar looking marks. I tried to keep mine as different as I could. Large stroke, shadow, etc.

    over 1 year ago

  5. Michael DiCristina Michael DiCristina

    the first thing I noticed when I looked at the larger version was "EW." Thought it was worth mentioning. Looking good, man

    over 1 year ago

  6. Pro Evan Huwa Evan Huwa

    good thought Michael. Thanks for noting it.

    over 1 year ago

  7. Steve Silvas Steve Silvas

    It's hard to be 100% original with marks these days. Looks good!

    over 1 year ago

  8. Bryan Couchman Bryan Couchman

    looks great evan! couple things that stick out to me right away are the container and the negative space. the container doesn't seem to fit the mark. i don't know what would better suit it better. maybe try a wider version of the green mark. by doing that, it might give that negative space in the middle some more room. right now it risks disappearing at smaller scales. i keep wanting to disconnect the border around the smaller green piece from the border around the larger green piece. i don't know if that makes sense or not haha but hopefully it does. anyways, looks great so far!

    likes

    over 1 year ago

  9. Pro Evan Huwa Evan Huwa

    Hey thanks Bryan! Really appreciate the feedback. I will definitely rework this and see if I can improve. I see what you are saying, and again really appreciate the crit.

    over 1 year ago

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