A different direction for the same project. Larger version attached with text.
Let me know your thoughts.
almost 2 years ago
I like the first one MUCH better. This one looks like a logo you'd find on snowboarding gear (still executed well though)
Reminds me of:
Hey Steve, I knew going in to this that there would be a lot of similar looking marks. I tried to keep mine as different as I could. Large stroke, shadow, etc.
the first thing I noticed when I looked at the larger version was "EW." Thought it was worth mentioning. Looking good, man
good thought Michael. Thanks for noting it.
It's hard to be 100% original with marks these days. Looks good!
looks great evan! couple things that stick out to me right away are the container and the negative space. the container doesn't seem to fit the mark. i don't know what would better suit it better. maybe try a wider version of the green mark. by doing that, it might give that negative space in the middle some more room. right now it risks disappearing at smaller scales. i keep wanting to disconnect the border around the smaller green piece from the border around the larger green piece. i don't know if that makes sense or not haha but hopefully it does. anyways, looks great so far!
Hey thanks Bryan! Really appreciate the feedback. I will definitely rework this and see if I can improve. I see what you are saying, and again really appreciate the crit.
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