I'll start off by saying Welcome to dribbble.
First off this is pretty nice I agree with @Tanveer that the boldness does look nice. But there are a few thing I would work on.
1. The drop shadow on the top bar buttons looks kinda pixelated and make the buttons look out of place, maybe try giving them a size of 1 or 2 to make it look smoother.
2. try the same thing on the inner shadow of the buttons.
3. Try adding a black outer stroke at 50% opacity on the top bar if you are indeed going for a bold feel, as it is now it makes the transition from top bar to the middle section look bland and boring.
4. Add the same or a similar drop shadow to the middle section text as you have in the top bar.
asside from those little things this looks very good, and has the potential to get many more likes than just 9.
love the glyphs and the font it works toward the bold feel.
2 Responses
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Tanveer Junayed
Like the boldness. Welcome to Dribbble!!
over 1 year ago
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David Balnites
I'll start off by saying Welcome to dribbble.
First off this is pretty nice I agree with @Tanveer that the boldness does look nice. But there are a few thing I would work on.
1. The drop shadow on the top bar buttons looks kinda pixelated and make the buttons look out of place, maybe try giving them a size of 1 or 2 to make it look smoother.
2. try the same thing on the inner shadow of the buttons.
3. Try adding a black outer stroke at 50% opacity on the top bar if you are indeed going for a bold feel, as it is now it makes the transition from top bar to the middle section look bland and boring.
4. Add the same or a similar drop shadow to the middle section text as you have in the top bar.
asside from those little things this looks very good, and has the potential to get many more likes than just 9.
love the glyphs and the font it works toward the bold feel.
over 1 year ago