Without Inner Circle

11 Responses

1. Pro Gedy Rivera

   Would love your thoughts on which one you like more.

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   5 months ago

2. Pro Richard Lowery Jr.

   I like this one better. The other one is amazing as well just the inner circle distracts me a lil bit.

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   5 months ago

3. Pro Shaun Moynihan

   I really like this one more than the other. Maybe give it an ornate edge instead?

   5 months ago

4. Pro Mani

   love it :) which font?

   5 months ago

5. Pro Rogie

   Yeah, agreed, like this one more. Typefaces are great. Maybe a scalloped edge? Depends of course, on what this is for.

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   5 months ago

6. Pro Joel Glovier

   Def like the one with the inner circle more. I think it frames the typography better.

   Although one thing distracts me, and it's the vertical alignment of the text. It feels like it's a bit high as is. Try aligning the center of the "o" characters with the center of the circle as your vertical alignment baseline?

   5 months ago

7. Pro Joel Glovier

   Also...like Rogie's idea of a scalloped edge, or an inverse scallop.

   5 months ago

8. elyse holladay

   I like this one a lot better. I wouldn't add anything--the simplicity of the circle versus the script is what makes it for me.

   5 months ago

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   A New Direction Heading in quite a different direction. Though the circle was a good option, I feel that this has a more organic feel, which is exactly what the client is lo... January 15, 2012

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   A New Direction

   by Gedy Rivera

   Heading in quite a different direction. Though the circle was a good option, I feel that this has a more organic feel, which is exactly what the client is looking for.

   As always, I welcome your constructive criticism, mostly because logos are clearly not my strength but I'm really looking forward to grow in this area.

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   4 months ago

10. Pro Daniel Golden

    I love sofrito, my mom used to make it when I was in high school and put it in scrambled eggs. Gedy, are you puerto rican, or venezuelan or que?

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    3 months ago

11. Pro Gedy Rivera

    @Daniel Golden Same here Daniel. And I'm Puerto Rican :)

    3 months ago