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Electric

by Phil Coffman Pro | July 20, 2010

5 Responses

  1. Pro Phil_newavatar2 Phil Coffman

    We've changed up the message a bit on this hero animation, focusing more on the vast reach of the client. These electricity brushes really came in handy.

    over 1 year ago

  2. Pro Photo_on_2010-12-13_at_22 Josh Puckett

    Phil I LOVE the lightning elements, especially the further away from source it gets, and branches off. So great. But... black stroke on the text? It looks a little garish to me... how does it look without it? Maybe step up a weight or two to increase the contrast? or a solid drop shadow? The stroke just kinda... turns me off... and I say that with the utmost love and adoration :)

    over 1 year ago

  3. Pro Pixelavatar_large_16_color Chris Wallace!

    @Josh, if it's all animated, I can see why it's outlined. Could be pretty wacky with no contrast between the text and lightning animation.

    over 1 year ago

  4. Pro Phil_newavatar2 Phil Coffman

    @Chris - Exactly the reason why I added the outline.

    I'm still testing out where that line of copy fits the best, but ultimately I am having to take into consideration the lightning behind it and how that would interfere overall legibility.

    over 1 year ago

  5. Pro Photo_on_2010-12-13_at_22 Josh Puckett

    Touché. Good forethought... how would a purple (either full or lowered opacity) background look, like in your other Dribbbles? I really can't wait to see this entire thing in full after production.

    over 1 year ago

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