Sholley's Blast Shop revision

3 Responses

1. Pro Joel Glovier

   Probably the final revision....maybe. :-)

   5 months ago

2. Pro Kevin Harris

   To be honest bro, this one hurts my eyes. The red and white outline is really making it look like something was thrown out of alignment - almost like you need 3D glasses or something. The texture and line combination in the text itself is creating some movement (graphic noise). Unless this is your intention, it detracts from the design and isn't appealing to look at. I would choose an outline either red or white. As for the text I think the diagonal texture application is creating the most noise. That's my 2 cents.

   5 months ago

3. Pro Joel Glovier

   Yeah, that was my intention. Going for the old school vintage offset press look.

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   5 months ago