Like the overall direction, but think a few things could use a bit more love.
- the body text could use more line height and a different justification.
- Try matching the edges of the facebook field with the edges of the body text above it.
- Nice start on the button, but the sold background might have a few too many 'effects' applied to it.
- Try centering the 'Facebook fans' line with the button above.
Don't mean to be a jerk, I think this is heading is a good direction overall.
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A pretty popping order now button I've been working on for a client.
5 months ago
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Ted Goas
Like the overall direction, but think a few things could use a bit more love.
- the body text could use more line height and a different justification.
- Try matching the edges of the facebook field with the edges of the body text above it.
- Nice start on the button, but the sold background might have a few too many 'effects' applied to it.
- Try centering the 'Facebook fans' line with the button above.
Don't mean to be a jerk, I think this is heading is a good direction overall.
5 months ago