I can read it just fine. The only readability issue I see is that the slab on the 'c' kind of gets lost in the interaction with the 'F'. The texture and transparency is great. Nice work!
I think it's readable but I agree with you Meagan. Seems distracting and you have to work a bit to read it. Amazing textures though! You really are one of the best at this [and by this I mean "your"] style
And I don't think readability is an issue at all. My only feedback is perhaps the textures on the typography may be a bit too strong, especially since you have the background texture showing through it as well ...
Also, a tad nit picking issue: The top left corner of the R in Color touches a wee bit on the V on Five... it's too small of a detail to look like it's done on purpose, and I think it would look better pushed out a pixel or two so that it doesn't show up.
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Meagan Fisher
I love this effect, but I think it may be too hard to read. Hm.
over 1 year ago
Wow, nice mix of colors. I have no issue reading it.
over 1 year ago
I can read it just fine. The only readability issue I see is that the slab on the 'c' kind of gets lost in the interaction with the 'F'. The texture and transparency is great. Nice work!
over 1 year ago
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Hunter Hastings
This is my fav of the mix.
over 1 year ago
Agree with Steve about the legibility with the C and F, but other than perfectly readable, and making me drool.
over 1 year ago
I think it's readable but I agree with you Meagan. Seems distracting and you have to work a bit to read it. Amazing textures though! You really are one of the best at this [and by this I mean "your"] style
over 1 year ago
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Bryan Le
I love this!
And I don't think readability is an issue at all. My only feedback is perhaps the textures on the typography may be a bit too strong, especially since you have the background texture showing through it as well ...
Also, a tad nit picking issue: The top left corner of the R in Color touches a wee bit on the V on Five... it's too small of a detail to look like it's done on purpose, and I think it would look better pushed out a pixel or two so that it doesn't show up.
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over 1 year ago
Love everything about this Meagan: the colors, the fonts, the layout, the texture. Makes me want to have a desktop for my Mac of it.
over 1 year ago
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Michael Parenteau
This is gorgeous!
over 1 year ago
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Monika Kehrer
Love this & love your style!
over 1 year ago
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Christina Durbin
The subtlety of the background is amazing and I'm in love with the slight transparency. Gorgeous!
over 1 year ago