Drbl 1216

8 Responses

1. Pro Aaron Sechrist

   WIP. 2nd phase. input/feedback kindly requested.

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   6 months ago

2. Pro David Cran

   I love it.

   6 months ago

3. Pro David Sizemore

   Hah! That. Is. Awesome.

   OK, one thing that throws me off is the clip—when I see the fist, I see it as the primary weapon. But a bunch of fists wouldn't fit in that clip. Maybe that clip could be a handle? It might balance the composition a little if that clip or handle was moved up to the second grey section, too.

   Really love this.

   6 months ago

4. Pro Simon H.

   I love the hand in there. I'd see the badge being bigger.

   6 months ago

5. Mason Phillips

   Love love love these colors, and the shading on the fist is awesome. I'm with David on the clip, though. It seems a little out of place—all of the other elements are very retro-pulp-space-age-y and then there's this one part that looks like it came straight off a modern-day assault rifle. Feels like a strange juxtaposition.

   6 months ago

6. Pro Aaron Sechrist

   @Mason & David Good points - thinking of replacing with a second handle. My love of Rambo movies could not be denied on the banana clip I guess.

   The fist itself is not the ammo, on the next pass it will be more obvious what it's there for.

   Thx for the feedback.

   6 months ago

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   Raygun52 v3 As always, feedback appreciated. Thanks. December 20, 2011

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   by Aaron Sechrist

   As always, feedback appreciated. Thanks.

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   5 months ago

8. Pro Aaron Sechrist

   It is live. http://www.raygun52.com/the-armory/2012/1/10/033-okp-52-by-aaron-sechrist.html

   5 months ago