I agree - it's a little hard to make out the letters, but that's very often the way with monograms, and they're woven together well. It's a really great exploration.
One thing I can point out that is a common mistake (often for me too if I'm not paying attention to my own work): when drawing the letter S in a font style that uses tapering thick and thin strokes, the thick part should be in the very center of the stroke of the S, not on the left and right bulges as you have it now. Does that make sense?
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Identity concept for the old boys rugby club I belong to.
Big ups to Simon Walker (@super_furry) for the texture help.
over 1 year ago
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Justin Lowery
Although it's hard to make out the letters, I do find it very interesting to view.
over 1 year ago
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Rich Tabor
Kickass
over 1 year ago
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Simon Walker
I agree - it's a little hard to make out the letters, but that's very often the way with monograms, and they're woven together well. It's a really great exploration.
One thing I can point out that is a common mistake (often for me too if I'm not paying attention to my own work): when drawing the letter S in a font style that uses tapering thick and thin strokes, the thick part should be in the very center of the stroke of the S, not on the left and right bulges as you have it now. Does that make sense?
over 1 year ago
Don't need to read it to enjoy the form. It reminds me of harry potter... So I love it!
over 1 year ago