Something I did a long time ago for a friend but lost the vector. So I decided to redraw it and make it more to my liking. Still a WIP but I'm liking it more and more. Any suggestions?
Love the hard angles and dynamic lighting, but the perspective of the gun/hockey stick seems a little off. This guy looks to be facing us at an angle, with his left side (our right) closer to the viewer. But the gun barrel appears to be perfectly horizontal and parallel. I feel like it should be angled along with his body.
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MacK
Something I did a long time ago for a friend but lost the vector. So I decided to redraw it and make it more to my liking. Still a WIP but I'm liking it more and more. Any suggestions?
6 months ago
I don't think you need to change a thing. I like it as is.
6 months ago
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Jesse Spencer
yeah I agree. This is great.
6 months ago
Love the hard angles and dynamic lighting, but the perspective of the gun/hockey stick seems a little off. This guy looks to be facing us at an angle, with his left side (our right) closer to the viewer. But the gun barrel appears to be perfectly horizontal and parallel. I feel like it should be angled along with his body.
5 months ago
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MacK
Thanks for that feedback Mason. I'll see what I can do.
5 months ago
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Jonas Söder
This is dope, reminds me on Dick Tracy.
5 months ago
Love style like that:)
4 months ago
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Robert Ullman
I would almost say simplify the barrel end of the stick so that it's JUST a stick. Maybe add a butt cap to add back in a little visual flair.
But it's a sharp logo...good colors too. I dig it!
3 months ago
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MacK
Thanks for the feedback. I'll try that out Rob.
3 months ago
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Gangster2
by MacK
A revised 'gun' stick and various small tweaks.
3 months ago