I like what you're doing here. I think with regard to the pencil's shadows, it almost looks like the right shadow could be blended a little differently, it looks like the pencil has a wrapping paper around it that ends: http://cl.ly/2h2j1q220j2i3c430S0E Maybe making the shadow take up the whole side, or having a lighter gradient could help. Keep it up!
Nice job, but I have to agree, the shadow needs some more work. Since just the tip touches the paper you should add a gradient to the shadow.
Btw have you thought about this?
Looks nice... the shading on the tip of the pencil doesn't match the rest of the lighting though; the highlight should be on the top, not the bottom :D
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download? :)
6 months ago
I like what you're doing here. I think with regard to the pencil's shadows, it almost looks like the right shadow could be blended a little differently, it looks like the pencil has a wrapping paper around it that ends: http://cl.ly/2h2j1q220j2i3c430S0E Maybe making the shadow take up the whole side, or having a lighter gradient could help. Keep it up!
6 months ago
Nice job, but I have to agree, the shadow needs some more work. Since just the tip touches the paper you should add a gradient to the shadow.
Btw have you thought about this?
6 months ago
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Kubilay Sapayer
check the attachment for the icon =)
6 months ago
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Ollin
Looks nice... the shading on the tip of the pencil doesn't match the rest of the lighting though; the highlight should be on the top, not the bottom :D
6 months ago
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Kubilay Sapayer
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5 months ago