The balance between the three elements seem to be little bit off.. its disrupting the overall rythmn. Otherwise good elements used and good color scheme too!
It's close. Each piece seems to separate itself too much from the overall composition. Maybe try weaving them together so they each have an opportunity to play off each other.
Really like this very clean. You should drip some oil on the wood in the comp, just throwing it out there, might be a fun alt version to contrast this clean look.
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A logo for my sister-and-law's new business. They sell premium olive oils and balsamic vinegars in Vancouver.
6 months ago
The balance between the three elements seem to be little bit off.. its disrupting the overall rythmn. Otherwise good elements used and good color scheme too!
6 months ago
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Mike Berg
It's close. Each piece seems to separate itself too much from the overall composition. Maybe try weaving them together so they each have an opportunity to play off each other.
6 months ago
Thanks for the feedback guys
6 months ago
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Caleb Royce Lummer
awesome typography!
6 months ago
Thanks!
6 months ago
nice!
6 months ago
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Matthew Hernandez
Really like this very clean. You should drip some oil on the wood in the comp, just throwing it out there, might be a fun alt version to contrast this clean look.
6 months ago
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