There is something a little too complicated about that "A". Would it be better as two strokes, with the legs of the "A" and a "shallow V" shape for the bar?
I like the 'A'. Those little details give it a lot of personality. For me the leg of the 'R' is pushing out a bit far but that's nitpicking. I'm loving this stuff.
This is great! The illustration is wonderful. I agree with Stewart though; I think the leg of the R is a bit wonky. I'm also not entirely sold on the little protrusion on the I.
looks pretty neat. very fitting for the piece. just to throw an idea out there– i wonder what it would look like if you took that same little triangle/branch you used on the "i" and also had one on the "p". Maybe to distribute/repeat those little elements a bit more. But, that is just if you want to look at other options. It looks great how it is :)
This is amazing! I agree with ^ about keeping the spurs and stuff a bit wonky, maybe making the R's leg match the angle of the A. Also maybe about 5% smaller type to get closer to the weight of the mark. Overall, crazy fresh!
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Fuzzco™
The last shot was premature. We'd love to get some feedback on this type first.
over 1 year ago
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Nikita Lebedev
Yeaj, very-very cool! Love it!
over 1 year ago
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Jesus
I like the type it fits with the style. it feels little bit of center though.
over 1 year ago
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Dan Holmoe
There is something a little too complicated about that "A". Would it be better as two strokes, with the legs of the "A" and a "shallow V" shape for the bar?
over 1 year ago
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Brandon Oxendine
Got dang.
over 1 year ago
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Small Fortune
Awesome!
over 1 year ago
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Stewart Scott-Curran
I like the 'A'. Those little details give it a lot of personality. For me the leg of the 'R' is pushing out a bit far but that's nitpicking. I'm loving this stuff.
over 1 year ago
Sick :)
over 1 year ago
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Nathan Walker
Well done!
over 1 year ago
Geometric goodness all the way around.
over 1 year ago
Dig it. Might be cool to see the type in outline.
over 1 year ago
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Social Design House
Love the subtle texture...just enough...
over 1 year ago
This is great! The illustration is wonderful. I agree with Stewart though; I think the leg of the R is a bit wonky. I'm also not entirely sold on the little protrusion on the I.
over 1 year ago
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Mike Rogers
This is wonderful. I agree with the comments about the R. Matching the angle of the A's legs could work.
over 1 year ago
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Brad Woodard
looks pretty neat. very fitting for the piece. just to throw an idea out there– i wonder what it would look like if you took that same little triangle/branch you used on the "i" and also had one on the "p". Maybe to distribute/repeat those little elements a bit more. But, that is just if you want to look at other options. It looks great how it is :)
over 1 year ago
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Forefathers™
Gorgeous!
over 1 year ago
Is it neutraface? I agree about the A being a bit too complicated. Also consider adding a spur element from the i elsewhere?
over 1 year ago
Type looks nice. Neutraface?
over 1 year ago
i love the dot texture.
over 1 year ago
First, I really love the wolf. It has some personnality.
For the letter, I love the detail in the «A» and the «I». Maybe you can modify the R?
over 1 year ago
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Michael Dolejš
Really cool!
over 1 year ago
omfg hnggggg
over 1 year ago
This is pretty awesome and the type is sweet. I'd just make the same detail than letter "I" on letter "P".
over 1 year ago
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Dan Cassaro
I say keep it half wonky and weird! Maybe even make another letter a bit weirder. Makes sense with the word and illustration I think?
over 1 year ago
This is amazing! I agree with ^ about keeping the spurs and stuff a bit wonky, maybe making the R's leg match the angle of the A. Also maybe about 5% smaller type to get closer to the weight of the mark. Overall, crazy fresh!
over 1 year ago