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15 Responses

  1. Pro 28 Milos Sutanovac

    I liked the orange part :(

    over 1 year ago

  2. Pro Tumblr_lqwk84y3vo1qzu15ho1_1280 Tyler Galpin

    This is a lot nicer IMO.

    Perhaps add some more space between the "Latest..." element and the article title?

    That background looks awesome!

    over 1 year ago

  3. Pro Xl Dan Sullivan

    Lovely, but something doesn't settle quite right with how yellow background box is crossing the 2 pieces of paper. It may, however, be a totally different story with a full view.

    over 1 year ago

  4. Pro Brian_hoff Brian Hoff

    @Milos The orange was changed to bring a little bit more sophistication to the page.

    @Tyler, good call. Thanks man... Now go buy your FOWD in NYC passes! :)

    over 1 year ago

  5. Img_01652 Seth Gerard

    love the little grid!

    over 1 year ago

  6. Kevin-bio_jpg_220x270_crop_q85 Kevin Tamura

    Damn, I really dug the orange.

    over 1 year ago

  7. Pro Veer kern Patrick Haney

    I'm with Milos. The orange was really bold and unique, something a grey banner just can't bring to this design. Besides, the rest of it is detailed and sophisticated, so I don't see how the orange bar detracts from that.

    over 1 year ago

  8. Thumb Josh Cagwin

    I dug the orange also. I'm not sure the grey makes it look more sophisticated. Either color works though.

    over 1 year ago

  9. Pro Brian_hoff Brian Hoff

    Thanks for the feedback everyone. Maybe it's seeing the orange bar in full context or maybe it's just me being "picky-ol-Brian" :) I'm definitely going to explore working in the orange again though. Thanks!

    over 1 year ago

  10. Pro New-avatar David Yeiser

    I like what you've done with the old man in this one ;)

    over 1 year ago

  11. Pro Ice-horse2 Birgit Zimmermann

    love that grid background.

    however, I feel the yellow band (saying "latest article") should be interrupted in a way where the first paper sheet ends.

    over 1 year ago

  12. Pro Small Chris Bowler

    Yep, another ditto on the orange.

    over 1 year ago

  13. Pro Tingo Rogie

    It all sucks. In opposite land! I really like it brohamski!

    over 1 year ago

  14. Pro Sm-01 Shaun Moynihan

    Definitely liking this direction a lot more. What if you were to increase the drop shadow behind the last piece of paper to add a little depth? Also, looks like the the bottom piece of paper has a snippet missing in the top left =)

    over 1 year ago

  15. _sm76697_2 Dani Nordin

    Much cleaner, and better integration on the map. Agreed with the first commenter that the orange was a good foil to the blue - but then, it's a combination I love, and my fiancé can't stand it because he thinks it's Gator colors ;-)

    over 1 year ago

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