Lovely, but something doesn't settle quite right with how yellow background box is crossing the 2 pieces of paper. It may, however, be a totally different story with a full view.
I'm with Milos. The orange was really bold and unique, something a grey banner just can't bring to this design. Besides, the rest of it is detailed and sophisticated, so I don't see how the orange bar detracts from that.
Thanks for the feedback everyone. Maybe it's seeing the orange bar in full context or maybe it's just me being "picky-ol-Brian" :) I'm definitely going to explore working in the orange again though. Thanks!
Definitely liking this direction a lot more. What if you were to increase the drop shadow behind the last piece of paper to add a little depth? Also, looks like the the bottom piece of paper has a snippet missing in the top left =)
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Milos Sutanovac
I liked the orange part :(
over 1 year ago
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Tyler Galpin
This is a lot nicer IMO.
Perhaps add some more space between the "Latest..." element and the article title?
That background looks awesome!
over 1 year ago
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Dan Sullivan
Lovely, but something doesn't settle quite right with how yellow background box is crossing the 2 pieces of paper. It may, however, be a totally different story with a full view.
over 1 year ago
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Brian Hoff
@Milos The orange was changed to bring a little bit more sophistication to the page.
@Tyler, good call. Thanks man... Now go buy your FOWD in NYC passes! :)
over 1 year ago
love the little grid!
over 1 year ago
Damn, I really dug the orange.
over 1 year ago
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Patrick Haney
I'm with Milos. The orange was really bold and unique, something a grey banner just can't bring to this design. Besides, the rest of it is detailed and sophisticated, so I don't see how the orange bar detracts from that.
over 1 year ago
I dug the orange also. I'm not sure the grey makes it look more sophisticated. Either color works though.
over 1 year ago
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Brian Hoff
Thanks for the feedback everyone. Maybe it's seeing the orange bar in full context or maybe it's just me being "picky-ol-Brian" :) I'm definitely going to explore working in the orange again though. Thanks!
over 1 year ago
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David Yeiser
I like what you've done with the old man in this one ;)
over 1 year ago
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Birgit Zimmermann
love that grid background.
however, I feel the yellow band (saying "latest article") should be interrupted in a way where the first paper sheet ends.
over 1 year ago
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Chris Bowler
Yep, another ditto on the orange.
over 1 year ago
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Rogie
It all sucks. In opposite land! I really like it brohamski!
over 1 year ago
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Shaun Moynihan
Definitely liking this direction a lot more. What if you were to increase the drop shadow behind the last piece of paper to add a little depth? Also, looks like the the bottom piece of paper has a snippet missing in the top left =)
over 1 year ago
Much cleaner, and better integration on the map. Agreed with the first commenter that the orange was a good foil to the blue - but then, it's a combination I love, and my fiancé can't stand it because he thinks it's Gator colors ;-)
over 1 year ago