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La Bubbly

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11 Responses

  1. Pro F Fuzzco™

    Any last words before this gets shipped?

    over 1 year ago

  2. Pro Avatar92 Joseph Blalock

    Yeah, it's way awesome. Especially the popped bubbles above SPARKLING.

    Any reason for using dashed lines in some places and solid in others?

    over 1 year ago

  3. Pro Img_1423 Meredith Marsh

    love this!

    over 1 year ago

  4. Usa_avatar_3 Bobby McKenna

    I kinda wish that last little dash to the left of 750 weren't like half the length of the rest of em.

    Same issue with the dashes above SPARKLING.

    And why SPARKLIN' some places and SPARKLING others?

    Overall, this is a beaut, though. Just nitpicking.

    over 1 year ago

  5. Sits2 Derrick Pelletier

    I really like this, it has some nice balance.

    A couple things:
    First, I sort of feel like it's begging for a secondary font.
    And second, contains sulfites is so large that it could come across as a little off-putting to the average consumer, if you know what I mean.

    over 1 year ago

  6. Phone Dustin Hoffman

    What Derrick said. A complimentary serif font would be great imo.

    over 1 year ago

  7. Pro Avatar Allison Grayce

    This is beautiful! I do agree with everyone's comments about the dashes and secondary font. Great job :)

    over 1 year ago

  8. Pro 100 Krystyn Heide

    Awesome! I think dashed lines everywhere (or removing the bursts on solid lines) would be a nice balance.

    over 1 year ago

  9. Phone Dustin Hoffman

    Popular page, congrats!

    over 1 year ago

  10. F

    This is what happened based off your honest foodback. Thank you for that...

    We debated whether or not to change the tagline to read "sparklinG" and decided against it. B/c of this, we must have "sparklinG" somewhere on the label. (development history: When we thought we were packaging champagne, we coined the line "insane in the champagne." Alas, this is not champagne :(

    So whachootheenk?

    over 1 year ago

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    over 1 year ago

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