A couple things:
First, I sort of feel like it's begging for a secondary font.
And second, contains sulfites is so large that it could come across as a little off-putting to the average consumer, if you know what I mean.
This is what happened based off your honest foodback. Thank you for that...
We debated whether or not to change the tagline to read "sparklinG" and decided against it. B/c of this, we must have "sparklinG" somewhere on the label. (development history: When we thought we were packaging champagne, we coined the line "insane in the champagne." Alas, this is not champagne :(
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Fuzzco™
Any last words before this gets shipped?
over 1 year ago
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Joseph Blalock
Yeah, it's way awesome. Especially the popped bubbles above SPARKLING.
Any reason for using dashed lines in some places and solid in others?
over 1 year ago
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Meredith Marsh
love this!
over 1 year ago
I kinda wish that last little dash to the left of 750 weren't like half the length of the rest of em.
Same issue with the dashes above SPARKLING.
And why SPARKLIN' some places and SPARKLING others?
Overall, this is a beaut, though. Just nitpicking.
over 1 year ago
I really like this, it has some nice balance.
A couple things:
First, I sort of feel like it's begging for a secondary font.
And second, contains sulfites is so large that it could come across as a little off-putting to the average consumer, if you know what I mean.
over 1 year ago
What Derrick said. A complimentary serif font would be great imo.
over 1 year ago
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Allison Grayce
This is beautiful! I do agree with everyone's comments about the dashes and secondary font. Great job :)
over 1 year ago
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Krystyn Heide
Awesome! I think dashed lines everywhere (or removing the bursts on solid lines) would be a nice balance.
over 1 year ago
Popular page, congrats!
over 1 year ago
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La Bubbly
by Fuzzco™
This is what happened based off your honest foodback. Thank you for that...
We debated whether or not to change the tagline to read "sparklinG" and decided against it. B/c of this, we must have "sparklinG" somewhere on the label. (development history: When we thought we were packaging champagne, we coined the line "insane in the champagne." Alas, this is not champagne :(
So whachootheenk?
over 1 year ago
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Snippet from the Bubbly Site
by Fuzzco™
The white is a hover state for that button.
over 1 year ago