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6 Responses

1. Pro Paul Lloyd

   The result of a collaboration between me, Michelle and James Bates.

   6 months ago

2. Paul Randall

   Something to do with reading on multiple devices?

   Or an elaborate paper-plane.

   6 months ago

3. James Bates

   Could I make some suggestions to think about?

   The book needs to feel more like a book. i.e. I think it needs some depth. Kind of like you have with the map - which incidentally probably doesn't need any depth.

   Have you tried adding some texture? Maybe lines on the book to represent words or grid lines or contours on the map? I realise these won't render at a small size but might help?

   Finally it think it's feels just a touch too deep on the z-axis. It's making it look deeper than it is wider - which feels a little odd.

   6 months ago

4. James Bates

   But apart from that nice work guys! :)

   6 months ago

5. Pro Paul Lloyd

   Thanks for the extra feedback from the road James—will revise now!

   6 months ago

6. Pro Paul Lloyd

   Here is a revision to this design (oops, should have rebounded it!)

   6 months ago