MobisleNotes login page

4 Responses

1. Pro Christoffer Du Rietz

   Would love some serious criticism on this sign in/up page including the illustration. Something feels off but I can't put my finger on it. Any comments are dearly appreciated. Thanks, and don't forget to check out the attached full version.

   6 months ago

2. Erin Nolan

   Really pretty. I'm thinking the clouds need to be reworked because you're combining a thick illustrated look with areas of extreme transparency/ realism. Take a look at the wunderkit landing page for inspiration with clouds. If you brighten up those input boxes they will balance the composition and draw the eye to the call to action (the grey gets lost)

   6 months ago

3. Pro Christoffer Du Rietz

   Thanks a bunch! Great comments! About the clouds I actually got the same comment on twitter, and made it all blurry now and it already feels a lot better. Couldn't put my finger on that. I'll fiddle some more and see if it can improve it even more. Thanks!

   6 months ago

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   MobisleNotes login pag... Ok, modified based on input. Better? Further comments? Thanks in advance, and again, don't forget to check the attached full version. November 24, 2011

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   MobisleNotes login page, try 2

   by Christoffer Du Rietz

   Ok, modified based on input. Better? Further comments? Thanks in advance, and again, don't forget to check the attached full version.

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   6 months ago