First of all, thank you everybody. I appreciate every one of your comments and this really caught me by surprise.
In the end this was definitely rejected. The client said that he liked the design but he didn't like the concept (?).
Being a logo for an augmented reality app, I wanted it to express the concept of folding dimensions, like folding 3D world into 2D so you can keep it in your pocket and take it with you.
I think I will reuse it in a future personal project, maybe changing it a little but keeping the style and the spirit of it.
Thanks for your feedback. I noticed the 2px issue too, but for some reason I wanted to keep it like this, but now, when i look at it, those 2px jump to my face and scratch my eyes ; )
I'll fix it in a future revision (wich I plan to do as soon as I finish the job)
Regarding the typography, I'd really appreciate if you told me what you think are the weak points. Or if it's just that it reminds you of Adobe Air (It was not intentional and it fact I didn't notice it until I read your comment) or you think it doesn't match the simbol.
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I promise to rebound the current logo and the final version of this as soon as I can.
About the typography: I found there was too much spacing, your rebound is much better on that. Not sure about the Myriad though, I'd probably look for a different font.
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Edokoa
WIP. Possibly rejected by client.
almost 3 years ago
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ludwiczakpawel
whoa, man! i love it! i would give you double 'Like' if I could :D
almost 3 years ago
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Edokoa
Thank you very much!
almost 3 years ago
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Matthew Skiles
Too bad this was rejected. Because this is awesome :)
almost 3 years ago
How can you reject this?
almost 3 years ago
Couse the client is stupid ;)
almost 3 years ago
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Jared Laham
Really like your attention to detail on the glow. Looks good!
almost 3 years ago
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Tim Van Damme
Love this, one irk I have is the bottom left corner of the red triangle. 2px up? Also not a big fan of the typography.
For some reason I want this to be a real object I can spin around...
almost 3 years ago
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Bjørn Endre Langeland
Nice one, great choice of colors :D
almost 3 years ago
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Pedja Rusic
Clients are mostly dumb bastards with money...
almost 3 years ago
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Birgit Zimmermann
the icon is great, I also want to hold it in my hands and touch it :)
almost 3 years ago
really.effin.awesome.
Nice work bro!
almost 3 years ago
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Olivier Vanbiervliet
Like it very much - agree with Tim on the 2px and typography: it reminds me of Adobe Air (unless it's intentional)
almost 3 years ago
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Edokoa
First of all, thank you everybody. I appreciate every one of your comments and this really caught me by surprise.
In the end this was definitely rejected. The client said that he liked the design but he didn't like the concept (?).
Being a logo for an augmented reality app, I wanted it to express the concept of folding dimensions, like folding 3D world into 2D so you can keep it in your pocket and take it with you.
I think I will reuse it in a future personal project, maybe changing it a little but keeping the style and the spirit of it.
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@Tim Van Damme & @Miro Keller:
Thanks for your feedback. I noticed the 2px issue too, but for some reason I wanted to keep it like this, but now, when i look at it, those 2px jump to my face and scratch my eyes ; )
I'll fix it in a future revision (wich I plan to do as soon as I finish the job)
Regarding the typography, I'd really appreciate if you told me what you think are the weak points. Or if it's just that it reminds you of Adobe Air (It was not intentional and it fact I didn't notice it until I read your comment) or you think it doesn't match the simbol.
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I promise to rebound the current logo and the final version of this as soon as I can.
Again. Thank you
almost 3 years ago
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Olivier Vanbiervliet
About the typography: I found there was too much spacing, your rebound is much better on that. Not sure about the Myriad though, I'd probably look for a different font.
almost 3 years ago
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Tim Van Damme
What oVan said. The icon screams for a more solid font, but more heavy too.
almost 3 years ago
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Yummygum
You should show the client how many people 'liked' this ;)
almost 3 years ago
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Joshua Sortino
It's too good.
almost 3 years ago
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Nando
I wouldn't reject it, even though I wouldn't like the concept.
almost 3 years ago
What beautiful, subtle details on this! Love the finely tuned opacity mask and the colored glows for each shape. Nice job!
almost 3 years ago
Beautiful concept!
almost 3 years ago
So incredible... minus the typography
almost 3 years ago
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Edokoa
Thank you again. Normally I use to like tighter typography but this time I felt like it needed more spacing, seems like I was wrong.
I'll work on that.
almost 3 years ago
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Matt Hamm
Dam those pesky interfering clients. This is sweet.
almost 3 years ago
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Harry Ford
Would love to see this on white also :) Really like it
almost 3 years ago