The end of the C where it meets the circular border on the left bothers me. I don't like how the top edge curves upward but the bottom goes straight into the circle. It's like the thickness of the letter changes right at that moment where we can't see what it does. I think it should just go straight into the circle like the ends of the H.
^Same thought for the 'C'. I also might be just a bit concerned that your 'C' might be misread as a 'b'...probably due to the length of the line encroachment. Logically that's seems unlikely, but maybe you want to try shortening it up just a bit?
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Any thoughts?
almost 2 years ago
Nice typographic!
The end of the C where it meets the circular border on the left bothers me. I don't like how the top edge curves upward but the bottom goes straight into the circle. It's like the thickness of the letter changes right at that moment where we can't see what it does. I think it should just go straight into the circle like the ends of the H.
almost 2 years ago
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Michael Spitz
^Same thought for the 'C'. I also might be just a bit concerned that your 'C' might be misread as a 'b'...probably due to the length of the line encroachment. Logically that's seems unlikely, but maybe you want to try shortening it up just a bit?
In any case, good stuff!
almost 2 years ago
Thanks for the thoughts guys. Yea I didn't notice the C thing before hand.
almost 2 years ago