So this is the very first time I create an iPhone icon. After hours of carefully crafting pixels in Illustrator & Photoshop, this is what I came up with.
Nice. I like the abstractly figurative white shapes. I like the shadow within the white flame/head on the small icon.
The red glow along the bottom edge feels strange to me. If it's supposed to be reflective light, then it should extend toward the lower corners. Otherwise, it looks like the entire red background awkwardly dents inward just below the white shape. Unless that's what you're going for.
Thanks guys. I'm hesitant to move it up more becuse the tip (which you can't really see from this shot) is really thin. But I'll try it.
@Henry not final yet. Dribbble feedback has worked so well for my projects so whatever feedback I can get will help contribute towards the final version.
And @Ryan & @Ismael you're right! I'll get right on that.
Aww thanks Skylar. Yes, once again, I made this on my work computer which is a different Apple Display than the one I have at home. Definitely could be toned down.
Another thing I noticed is that on the small icon the edges of the logo look a tad jagged. Need to get those to look smoother.
Awesome! I was a worship leader at IHOP-Michiana in Indiana for several years before we moved back to Detroit, we're planning a trip down to IHOP-KC in August we'll have to meet up!
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Gedy Rivera
So this is the very first time I create an iPhone icon. After hours of carefully crafting pixels in Illustrator & Photoshop, this is what I came up with.
Totally open for feedback.
almost 2 years ago
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Ismael Burciaga
oooooo I LIKE!
almost 2 years ago
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Were you able to make it smoother? I cant tell here.
almost 2 years ago
I feel like the flame could move upward a few pixels in the smaller version.
almost 2 years ago
Nice. I like the abstractly figurative white shapes. I like the shadow within the white flame/head on the small icon.
The red glow along the bottom edge feels strange to me. If it's supposed to be reflective light, then it should extend toward the lower corners. Otherwise, it looks like the entire red background awkwardly dents inward just below the white shape. Unless that's what you're going for.
almost 2 years ago
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Jake Stutzman
looks great gedy. i like the glow on the bottom of it..
almost 2 years ago
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Ryan Rushing
Needs more pancakes. ;)
almost 2 years ago
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Ismael Burciaga
I agree with @Ryan and it needs a side of Hashbrowns and Toast :)
almost 2 years ago
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Henry Moran
Amazing work Gedy. Is this the final version?
almost 2 years ago
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Chris Young
Great first effort Gedy. I agree with Dan that the flame could move up slightly.
almost 2 years ago
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Gedy Rivera
Thanks guys. I'm hesitant to move it up more becuse the tip (which you can't really see from this shot) is really thin. But I'll try it.
@Henry not final yet. Dribbble feedback has worked so well for my projects so whatever feedback I can get will help contribute towards the final version.
And @Ryan & @Ismael you're right! I'll get right on that.
almost 2 years ago
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Skylar Hartman
Gedy you cease to amaze me. One thing you might consider doing is bring down the vibrancy of the red line. Other than that, it owns!
almost 2 years ago
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Gedy Rivera
Aww thanks Skylar. Yes, once again, I made this on my work computer which is a different Apple Display than the one I have at home. Definitely could be toned down.
Another thing I noticed is that on the small icon the edges of the logo look a tad jagged. Need to get those to look smoother.
almost 2 years ago
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Skylar Hartman
Hey no problem!
almost 2 years ago
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Yummygum
Nice one!
almost 2 years ago
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Joshua Sortino
The glow at the bottom rocks!
almost 2 years ago
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Matt Graham
Looks great Gedy! How are you attached to IHOP?
almost 2 years ago
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Gedy Rivera
Thanks Matt. I serve as the 'senior' web designer and anything else I can help with :-)
almost 2 years ago
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Matt Graham
Awesome! I was a worship leader at IHOP-Michiana in Indiana for several years before we moved back to Detroit, we're planning a trip down to IHOP-KC in August we'll have to meet up!
almost 2 years ago
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Gedy Rivera
Awesome! Let me know when you're around and we can definitely meet up.
almost 2 years ago
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Gedy Rivera
Hey all - question: Do you know how to bypass Apple's ugly icon glare on Apple mobile devices?
almost 2 years ago
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Skylar Hartman
This might help =)
almost 2 years ago
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Brandon Richards
Looks great Gedy, great icon, great church, great music.. now the fire on the iphone will never go out!
almost 2 years ago
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Ismael Burciaga
@Brandon - not unless I blow it out :-)
almost 2 years ago
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Krystyn Heide
I like it! The inner shading makes it feel a little indented though, may not be the case when it's on an actual iPhone. ;)
almost 2 years ago