This is looking good, I don't think the torn paper is working though. I think it's because the bottom sheet is too similar and kinda looks weird because it's the same, except chunks are missing.
I think the shape of the top paper looks fine, my issue with it is the bottom paper seems to be broken up into chuncks of about 40px wide, doesn't look organic to me. http://i.imgur.com/X4kWk.png
@David I have to say, I wasn't all that meticulous with the paper. It was one of those "close enough" moments. But thanks for the critique – I'm sure I'll end up touching it up later.
@Matthew Thanks! Your texture certainly helped make that possible.
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Dalton Woods
For those who like the wood texture, you may download & use it for free – courtesy of Matthew Skiles, a very talent designer.
7 months ago
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David Keegan
This is looking good, I don't think the torn paper is working though. I think it's because the bottom sheet is too similar and kinda looks weird because it's the same, except chunks are missing.
7 months ago
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Liam McKay
I actually quite like the torn paper myself, it's probably not how I would have done it either, but I think that's why I like it.
7 months ago
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Matthew Skiles
Looking good :)
7 months ago
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David Keegan
I think the shape of the top paper looks fine, my issue with it is the bottom paper seems to be broken up into chuncks of about 40px wide, doesn't look organic to me. http://i.imgur.com/X4kWk.png
7 months ago
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Gadzhi Kharkharov
Wow, full shot looks nice!
7 months ago
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Victor Coulon
I love the full shot! Nice job
7 months ago
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Dalton Woods
@David I have to say, I wasn't all that meticulous with the paper. It was one of those "close enough" moments. But thanks for the critique – I'm sure I'll end up touching it up later.
@Matthew Thanks! Your texture certainly helped make that possible.
Everyone else, thanks for the kind words.
7 months ago