I dig the uneven feel of that dashed line. But maybe the other elements are too crisp for it? Regardless I like the direction of this.
over 1 year ago
Dashed line might just be too big... smaller dashes. Overall everything looks good though.
Thank you all for the good feedback, and a big shout-out to Derek Punsalan for the invite!
looks good, welcome to Dribbble
I dig the uneven outline too. But everything else is crisp and aligned, making this shot a bit confusing. I guess the full view makes more sense?
gorgeous! great debut shot and welcome, jason!
Very nice work -- I would tone down the reflection/shine on the pink button a bit ...
The dashed line needs a bit more work in my opinion, it's blurry and has very rounded edges. But the whole thing looks really great!
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Rui Melo
I dig the uneven feel of that dashed line. But maybe the other elements are too crisp for it? Regardless I like the direction of this.
over 1 year ago
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Jonathan Patterson
Dashed line might just be too big... smaller dashes. Overall everything looks good though.
over 1 year ago
Thank you all for the good feedback, and a big shout-out to Derek Punsalan for the invite!
over 1 year ago
looks good, welcome to Dribbble
over 1 year ago
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Ted Goas
I dig the uneven outline too. But everything else is crisp and aligned, making this shot a bit confusing. I guess the full view makes more sense?
over 1 year ago
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Caleb Royce Lummer
gorgeous! great debut shot and welcome, jason!
over 1 year ago
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Ryan Bales
Very nice work -- I would tone down the reflection/shine on the pink button a bit ...
over 1 year ago
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Alexandre Deschamps
The dashed line needs a bit more work in my opinion, it's blurry and has very rounded edges. But the whole thing looks really great!
over 1 year ago