The lines are vibrating a lot. What about consolidating them or making them thinner? It might be nice if the San Francisco was in the same type as the Club & Country and maybe just 'SF'. Other than that, I like it a lot. The hand is really nice.
I don't know if you wanted help or not, but I thought I would give some.
nice work. question to consider though: if this logo was shrunk done really small, how much sense would it still make? which part of this logo do you want to be dominant?
Nice start though. I hope that sentiment didn't get lost in my mini critique.
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Kyle Tezak
A logo I'm working on for a new project by Eli Altman.
7 months ago
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Travis Ladue
The lines are vibrating a lot. What about consolidating them or making them thinner? It might be nice if the San Francisco was in the same type as the Club & Country and maybe just 'SF'. Other than that, I like it a lot. The hand is really nice.
I don't know if you wanted help or not, but I thought I would give some.
7 months ago
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Kyle Tezak
I think you're on to something. I'm going to play with it a bit.
7 months ago
Yes. Nice work, Kyle.
7 months ago
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Nate Eaton
nice work. question to consider though: if this logo was shrunk done really small, how much sense would it still make? which part of this logo do you want to be dominant?
Nice start though. I hope that sentiment didn't get lost in my mini critique.
7 months ago
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Ryan Feerer
super good.
7 months ago