I would try wrapping the banner behind the shield. The corners of the folds going over as much as they are is a bit distracting. Maybe also try playing with the white space between the cityscape and the banner? Nice work though, I like the progress so far.
Looking really nice so far. Seconding Tyler's comments as well, will be good to see where this goes. I'd also suggest making 'The' a little bigger as it's a bit difficult to make out at this size. I love the main 'Rust Belt' type!
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one of the comps I'm putting together for a Supporter Group for the Columbus Crew (MLS Soccer team). Suggestions?
over 1 year ago
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Tyler Corbett
I would try wrapping the banner behind the shield. The corners of the folds going over as much as they are is a bit distracting. Maybe also try playing with the white space between the cityscape and the banner? Nice work though, I like the progress so far.
over 1 year ago
Yea, no clue how I missed the ribbon, I think that happened when I made the whole ribbon into a group... yea, white space for sure, thanks bro
over 1 year ago
Looking really nice so far. Seconding Tyler's comments as well, will be good to see where this goes. I'd also suggest making 'The' a little bigger as it's a bit difficult to make out at this size. I love the main 'Rust Belt' type!
over 1 year ago