I think if you replace the handwriting script with complimentary sans-serif (or perhaps a condensed version of the primary sans), it'll look far more organized and appealing. It feels a bit too girly, artsy and sloppy as is. Good color choices though IMO.
Thanks for the advise, let me see how those changes may look. I used the handwriting script to convey the personable touch of the business.
Glad to be part of the Dribbble community.
Cheers,
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A business card concept, I've been working. Any thoughts??
7 months ago
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Alex Pankratov
I think if you replace the handwriting script with complimentary sans-serif (or perhaps a condensed version of the primary sans), it'll look far more organized and appealing. It feels a bit too girly, artsy and sloppy as is. Good color choices though IMO.
PS Welcome to Dribbble :)
7 months ago
Hey Alex,
Thanks for the advise, let me see how those changes may look. I used the handwriting script to convey the personable touch of the business.
Glad to be part of the Dribbble community.
Cheers,
7 months ago
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Caleb Royce Lummer
I agree with Alex. Nice debut and welcome!
7 months ago
Cheers Caleb!
7 months ago