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ribbon & dots v2

by Jasmin Wong Jun 23, 2010
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Shot_1275739108_teaser ribbon & dots An upcoming site for wedding soft goods. Going for elegant femininity without being nauseatingly girly. June 05, 2010

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ribbon & dots

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  1. Profile Jasmin Wong

    Refined the ribbon to be a lot sharper (the previous one was a bit wonky in some areas), put in a smoother paper texture.

    Thanks to Gedy & Rico for their excellent input. :)

    almost 2 years ago

  2. Pro Twiter Samantha Warren

    I definitely like the smoother texture and I really love the little details you have with the stitching. The only but of feedback I have is that the shadow behind "what's" and " this" cause the thin strokes of the font to look a little busy. Perhaps lighten the shadow or add a little more blur to it?

    almost 2 years ago

  3. N552531093_7333 Rico Sta Cruz

    Sure Jasmin! The stitches were an excellent touch. Re: the inset shadow on 'what's this', for me it's fine as it is. :)

    almost 2 years ago

  4. Profile Jasmin Wong

    Thanks guys :) I've softened the text shadow by a touch and it looks less harsh now.

    Just realised I forgot to add stitches to the ribbon tail in this preview!

    almost 2 years ago

  5. Me-square Sara White

    Love the stitching detail! Definitely looking forward to seeing more peeks at this design.

    almost 2 years ago

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