Which one?

14 Responses

1. Pro Sandro Dujmenovic

   First "j" fixed, two variations to choose.

   7 months ago

2. Pro Luke Ritchie

   top one

   3likes

   7 months ago

3. Pro Sandro Dujmenovic

   I agree!

   7 months ago

4. Pro Claire Coullon

   Definitely top one! Really nice revisions.

   1likes

   7 months ago

5. Pro Michael Spitz

   Nice improvements Sandro > Top for me as well.

   You might want to inject a little air here & there, but the letter forms are balancing out nicely.

   1likes

   7 months ago

6. Pro Claire Coullon

   ^ Seconding Michael's suggestion - I think the first half looks a little bit too tight overall compared to the second half.

   7 months ago

7. Pro Sandro Dujmenovic

   Yes, I agree, I haven't touched the spacing, but looks like this new "j" changed the overall perception a bit.

   7 months ago

8. Pro Jake Thompson

   Top one :)

   7 months ago

9. Dario Calonaci

   top one, more equilibrated with the rest

   7 months ago

10. David Elliott

    Top! :)

    7 months ago

11. Pro Marko Dugonjić

    You could also try even more contrast between two Js.

    1likes

    7 months ago

12. Marko Prljic

    Top.

    7 months ago

13. Pro Tom Haynes

    Top for sure

    7 months ago

14. Pro Jan Zabransky

    top

    7 months ago