I just saw this after I responded on my post, duh me. I love the colors and League Gothic is so damn good. I don't think it's too much, the Ostrich Sans looks good the way you used it.
I like it, I think the fonts work well together. The line height under "Little Black Work Dress" looks too tall for the 2 lines of small details imo. I'd also be curious how the logo would look without the top strokes (something about the empty space under the top lines above the L makes it look asymmetrical). Very cute! :)
Thanks for all the helpful feedback, guys! I'll post a new version soon. Someone on Forrst also mentioned that I might want to hand tweak the letters in "Rachel Nabors" so they line up on top of each other perfectly.
I made some edits to the logo as per advice from Dribbblers (thanks!) and Forrsters. Made the letters line up on top of each other, made top bar heavier, added more whitespace between the bars and letters while reducing logo's line-height.
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Redesigning rachelnabors.com, and I want your feedback! This is the upper part of the home page.
Having to come up with a logo and such. What do you think of the logo?
I'm using three font-families: Franklin Gothic, League Gothic, and Ostrich Sans. Is it too much?
Final version will have red hair and more colors. (Full version: http://forrst.com/posts/Rachel_Nabors_Sassy_diagram-PVx)
8 months ago
I just saw this after I responded on my post, duh me. I love the colors and League Gothic is so damn good. I don't think it's too much, the Ostrich Sans looks good the way you used it.
8 months ago
I like it, I think the fonts work well together. The line height under "Little Black Work Dress" looks too tall for the 2 lines of small details imo. I'd also be curious how the logo would look without the top strokes (something about the empty space under the top lines above the L makes it look asymmetrical). Very cute! :)
8 months ago
Agreed, I think I'd try it without the top stripes. and maybe a bit more of a whitespace outline around the star. Looking good!
7 months ago
Thanks for all the helpful feedback, guys! I'll post a new version soon. Someone on Forrst also mentioned that I might want to hand tweak the letters in "Rachel Nabors" so they line up on top of each other perfectly.
7 months ago
Rebound
Rachel Nabors logo
by Rachel Nabors
What do you think?
I made some edits to the logo as per advice from Dribbblers (thanks!) and Forrsters. Made the letters line up on top of each other, made top bar heavier, added more whitespace between the bars and letters while reducing logo's line-height.
Also, toying with the colors.
7 months ago