Now you're talking. This is a huge improvement. The only thing now that I see I would adjust is the "d" where the ribbon breaks. I would try and integrate it so it looks like a natural flow. But the colors you're using are beautiful. I could see this as a major brand.
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Meredith Marsh
Take Two on the ribbon idea. Less like spaghetti.
almost 2 years ago
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Jesse Gardner
Much, much better. Love the subtle shading.
almost 2 years ago
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Kyle Steed
Now you're talking. This is a huge improvement. The only thing now that I see I would adjust is the "d" where the ribbon breaks. I would try and integrate it so it looks like a natural flow. But the colors you're using are beautiful. I could see this as a major brand.
almost 2 years ago
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Alex Penny
nice type!
over 1 year ago