WIP logo for a collaborative project called "Typophotography", where one person's photos are combined with another one's words / thoughts.
Still pretty rough on the edges (literally) and playing with different stroke sizes. Also working on the shine on the lens - i just rushed this shot. :)
It's a nice start, but I'd work on the lens some. Maybe make the stroke of the white line around it thicker. Also I might take the text lines on the paper & make them different lengths (top long, bottom shorter). Just my 2¢.
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WIP logo for a collaborative project called "Typophotography", where one person's photos are combined with another one's words / thoughts.
Still pretty rough on the edges (literally) and playing with different stroke sizes. Also working on the shine on the lens - i just rushed this shot. :)
Thoughts / suggestions?
8 months ago
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Inka Mathew
Good concept, Aldrich! I agree, the lens still needs some love.
8 months ago
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Igor Garybaldi
— Clever!
8 months ago
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Rick Landon
It's a nice start, but I'd work on the lens some. Maybe make the stroke of the white line around it thicker. Also I might take the text lines on the paper & make them different lengths (top long, bottom shorter). Just my 2¢.
8 months ago
gotcha. thanks for the suggestions Rick! :D
8 months ago
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Typophotography, deux
by Aldrich Tan
WIP logo for a collaborative project called "Typophotography", where one person's photos are combined with another one's words / thoughts.
Fixed the lens, thicknesses, corners, and text lines. Thoughts / suggestions?
7 months ago