Had a bit of time to improve some details. I'm planning another round on this one, so, any comments are very welcome.
over 1 year ago
My only comment is that the clip looks if it is pulling tight, but the paper within it doesn't.
Great work though.
@Alan very true! well spotted.
Amazing work but I have a comment: you need to improve the white and yellow cards or papers. Now are a bit undefined. Also is a great job and the texture of the wallet is exceptional. :)
Agree with Jordi, and the shadows on the leather make it look like theirs some kinda bulge in there, like a trapped hamster. Still really cool though.
I love the little details on this awesome work!
Looks great -- I would add more detail to the papers -- make them more defined and sharp.
@Jordi Thanks mate. Those bits need definitely a bit more work.
@Birdy I get what you mean, i will try an improve that bit on the leather.
@Ryan Definitely, i'm planning to add some other bits such as pics and little charts. This is supposed to represent a project briefcase
Thanks you guys for your input. I will try to rebound this one as soon as i can.
by Joao Pires
Thanks for all your comments on the previous versions. Took them in consideration. Here's the final piece, let me know your thoughts.
over 1 year ago
very nice man!!! Like it!
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