The illustration is great, but I honestly think it'd work better without the figure interacting with the type. Also, the arm on the right could use a little more depth (the upper forearm line could extend towards his bicep more).
Hi Jordan,
Thank you for your feedback. It was one of our concepts. This one is our favorite. We were lucky enough to get 2011 Communicator Award for it.
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PlanMySite
Logo for Gemkin Millworks, regarded as one of the leading producers of fine custom woodworking in the state of New Jersey.
8 months ago
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Jordan Little
The illustration is great, but I honestly think it'd work better without the figure interacting with the type. Also, the arm on the right could use a little more depth (the upper forearm line could extend towards his bicep more).
8 months ago
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PlanMySite
Hi Jordan,
Thank you for your feedback. It was one of our concepts. This one is our favorite. We were lucky enough to get 2011 Communicator Award for it.
8 months ago
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Jordan Little
Nice!
8 months ago