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  1. Pro Avatar-large2 Dave Shea

    Thanks to feedback on the previous direction I've started narrowing down on this particular approach. It's quite a departure from the previous one, but feels more like an actual logo, with less potential for pushback (especially given the religious minefield of the previous one).

    I think I will keep the icons around for other parts of the overall visual identity though.

    almost 2 years ago

  2. Avatar-2011 Sean J Klassen

    Nice. This is looking much, much stronger. I like this idea a lot, but wasn't feeling the other one so much. Outside of the other comments I didn't see that one being able to scale well or work in alternative formats.

    almost 2 years ago

  3. Op-1 Jesse Dodds

    Loving the one on the left. Much stronger rebound.

    almost 2 years ago

  4. Pro Twitter-rubin-300px Dan Rubin

    Major departure, major improvement. This is looking quite strong as directions go.

    almost 2 years ago

  5. Pro Dc-2012 Dan Cederholm

    Wow, Dave, this is looking wonderful. Much more flexible as an identity.

    almost 2 years ago

  6. Pro Img_5092 Chris Harrison

    I love the middle version best. Way to evolve the concept! This is fantastic.

    almost 2 years ago

  7. Pro Dribbleavatar Renee Swigert

    Loving this concept!

    almost 2 years ago

  8. Photo_17 Trevor Gerzen

    Major step up from your previous ideas. It's awesome to see the evolution in this process. I'm sure this is the kind of thing Coach had in mind when he put together this league

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    almost 2 years ago

  9. Pro Avatar-large2 Dave Shea

    Thanks all. I wouldn't have hit upon this idea if it weren't for Dribbble in general, Chris Harrison's comment in particular, so I fully agree with Trevor: what a great league for upping one's game.

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    almost 2 years ago

  10. Pro Dribbble Jesse Gardner

    Dave: I love the middle version. It reminds me slightly of the logo for the Museum of London.

    I think what might make this logo even stronger is if all the colored globes were influencing the others. In other words, each segment of color seems to stand alone; it would look neat if each color was slightly transparent so that it inherited some of the hue behind it. Might create a more unified mark that better conveyed unity.

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    almost 2 years ago

  11. Pro Wtf John Williams

    What’s with you and cervixes these days?

    almost 2 years ago

  12. Pro 100 Krystyn Heide

    I like this new direction, and I think the one in the middle would unite the other icons and colors well.

    almost 2 years ago

  13. Pro Olem Ole Martin Kristiansen

    #3 is great. Great job, Dave.

    almost 2 years ago

  14. Madmen_dave Dave Hogue

    Nice work! Really dig the middle version with the color - seems to have the most opportunity for expanded usage (like color themes for content types from your original concept.) The left feels a tad too tight, and the right feels a tad too loose - something in between with the same monochromatic color group would give the colorful version some competition for me.

    almost 2 years ago

  15. Paulcripps_2010_bw Paul Cripps

    loving this version, I personally thing I'd go for the circles from third logo and the colours of the second.

    almost 2 years ago

  16. Pro Untitled-1 Jeff Broderick

    Nice! I love everything about #3. Good job!

    almost 2 years ago

  17. Wristcam_me_20091201-pict308 Chris Casciano

    I like this update.

    one thing that hit me on first look is that when viewing at the dribbble small thumb size the outer parts of the logo break down a bit and look more sketchy and the style clashes with the clean outline of the heart. Maybe there's just too much orange? I'm the wrong person to offer suggestions :)

    almost 2 years ago

  18. Pro Sunglasses Jake Przespo

    Wow, this is a very nice improvement from the last shot!

    I vote the middle one. The colors, to me, represent diversity more than the other two versions.

    almost 2 years ago

  19. 931523164_5_j22z_1 Jens Kanis

    The colours are really amazing!

    almost 2 years ago

  20. Pro Twitter Chris Glass

    Diggin this departure from the original concepts. Also voting for the middle here.

    almost 2 years ago

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