NIB (nib) Monogram 2

NIB Monogram - Identity Grid 2nd approach.

After receiving lots of useful feedback on the readability issue in the previous shot I made some refinements. Made it all less complex and gave it this 2-colored direction (as the client wanted to be more subtle in using different colors).

Still open for feedback. Can you spot the following letters?

'n - i - b'

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