I like it Mads.
Something to consider: Right now it looks like a cross between an illustrator live trace and a linocut print.
I would push it in the direction of intentional grooves and cuts that feel hand created rather than digitally reformed. If that makes sense? The parts that read that way the most to me is within the word "York".
First impression was like wow! but after reading Jim's comment I tend to agree. Especially 'or' reminds me of live trace. 'nyway, bottom line: i like it a lot.
Something in the Y is distracting me a bit; I think its the really really really skinny bits where it loops over (the contrast seems extreme from the top to the bottom). Something there just isn't sitting right, to me.
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How do I make this better?!
8 months ago
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Muhammad Ali Effendy
Everything looks perfect to me. Great flow Mads.
8 months ago
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Jim Leszczynski
I like it Mads.
Something to consider: Right now it looks like a cross between an illustrator live trace and a linocut print.
I would push it in the direction of intentional grooves and cuts that feel hand created rather than digitally reformed. If that makes sense? The parts that read that way the most to me is within the word "York".
Nice work man.
make. make. make.
8 months ago
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Stelian Vasile
First impression was like wow! but after reading Jim's comment I tend to agree. Especially 'or' reminds me of live trace. 'nyway, bottom line: i like it a lot.
8 months ago
Wowowoow! I love it, maybe a little work on the brush texture?
8 months ago
Looks real nice Mads.
8 months ago
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Jeremy Paul Beasley
This is beautiful.
8 months ago
Looks good mads. The skinny little counters in the loops of the k and the l seem out of style? Feel like they could just be single lines maybe.
8 months ago
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Jesus
Fire!
8 months ago
Something in the Y is distracting me a bit; I think its the really really really skinny bits where it loops over (the contrast seems extreme from the top to the bottom). Something there just isn't sitting right, to me.
8 months ago
Thanks for such positive comments guys.
Right now, I have a problem with the connection of /N/ and /O/ on the left and then I'll give the skinny counters some love.
8 months ago
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Jeremy Paul Beasley
I keep seeing this around and I'm reminded of how jealous I am.
8 months ago
Cheers, Jeremy.
6 months ago
Hmmm.. how to make it better?! Not to change a damn thing. Looks great!
21 days ago
Thanks a bunch, Joe.
15 days ago