How do I make this better?!
over 2 years ago
Everything looks perfect to me. Great flow Mads.
I like it Mads.
Something to consider: Right now it looks like a cross between an illustrator live trace and a linocut print.
I would push it in the direction of intentional grooves and cuts that feel hand created rather than digitally reformed. If that makes sense? The parts that read that way the most to me is within the word "York".
Nice work man.
make. make. make.
First impression was like wow! but after reading Jim's comment I tend to agree. Especially 'or' reminds me of live trace. 'nyway, bottom line: i like it a lot.
Wowowoow! I love it, maybe a little work on the brush texture?
Looks real nice Mads.
This is beautiful.
Looks good mads. The skinny little counters in the loops of the k and the l seem out of style? Feel like they could just be single lines maybe.
Something in the Y is distracting me a bit; I think its the really really really skinny bits where it loops over (the contrast seems extreme from the top to the bottom). Something there just isn't sitting right, to me.
Thanks for such positive comments guys.
Right now, I have a problem with the connection of /N/ and /O/ on the left and then I'll give the skinny counters some love.
I keep seeing this around and I'm reminded of how jealous I am.
Hmmm.. how to make it better?! Not to change a damn thing. Looks great!
almost 2 years ago
Thanks a bunch, Joe.
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