I like it Mads.
Something to consider: Right now it looks like a cross between an illustrator live trace and a linocut print.
I would push it in the direction of intentional grooves and cuts that feel hand created rather than digitally reformed. If that makes sense? The parts that read that way the most to me is within the word "York".
First impression was like wow! but after reading Jim's comment I tend to agree. Especially 'or' reminds me of live trace. 'nyway, bottom line: i like it a lot.
Something in the Y is distracting me a bit; I think its the really really really skinny bits where it loops over (the contrast seems extreme from the top to the bottom). Something there just isn't sitting right, to me.
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Mads Burcharth
How do I make this better?!
over 1 year ago
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Muhammad Ali Effendy
Everything looks perfect to me. Great flow Mads.
over 1 year ago
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Jim Leszczynski
I like it Mads.
Something to consider: Right now it looks like a cross between an illustrator live trace and a linocut print.
I would push it in the direction of intentional grooves and cuts that feel hand created rather than digitally reformed. If that makes sense? The parts that read that way the most to me is within the word "York".
Nice work man.
make. make. make.
over 1 year ago
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Stelian Vasile
First impression was like wow! but after reading Jim's comment I tend to agree. Especially 'or' reminds me of live trace. 'nyway, bottom line: i like it a lot.
over 1 year ago
Wowowoow! I love it, maybe a little work on the brush texture?
over 1 year ago
Looks real nice Mads.
over 1 year ago
This is beautiful.
over 1 year ago
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Dan Cassaro
Looks good mads. The skinny little counters in the loops of the k and the l seem out of style? Feel like they could just be single lines maybe.
over 1 year ago
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Jesus
Fire!
over 1 year ago
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Joel Derksen
Something in the Y is distracting me a bit; I think its the really really really skinny bits where it loops over (the contrast seems extreme from the top to the bottom). Something there just isn't sitting right, to me.
over 1 year ago
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Mads Burcharth
Thanks for such positive comments guys.
Right now, I have a problem with the connection of /N/ and /O/ on the left and then I'll give the skinny counters some love.
over 1 year ago
I keep seeing this around and I'm reminded of how jealous I am.
over 1 year ago
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Mads Burcharth
Cheers, Jeremy.
over 1 year ago
Hmmm.. how to make it better?! Not to change a damn thing. Looks great!
about 1 year ago
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Mads Burcharth
Thanks a bunch, Joe.
about 1 year ago