Looking better this is - only tiny nit pick is the vertical alignment of the x is off by 1px? Seems from looking in PS though that you can't align that sized x with a circle that will then align with the progress bar?
I think looking at pixels being zoomed in at 3200% for a while is messing with my head.
Beyond the alignment, I feel like the x might need to be just a tad smaller as well, It feels a little to crowded to me, but that may just be personal preference. Might be worth giving it a try just to see if it adds a nudge of further improvement.
Otherwise, good use of small feedback details to improve upon the former.
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Cameron Moll
Subtle refining based on tweaking and your feedback: One line of text, slightly darker 'x' button, slightly more vibrant green.
8 months ago
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Corey Haggard
ahhh, yes much better!
8 months ago
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Samuel Couto
And a not slighter, but huge improvement!
8 months ago
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Cameron Moll
Critiques are quite helpful, aren't they. Thanks for the feedback.
8 months ago
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matt rossi
much better
8 months ago
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Chris Rowe
Looking better this is - only tiny nit pick is the vertical alignment of the x is off by 1px? Seems from looking in PS though that you can't align that sized x with a circle that will then align with the progress bar?
I think looking at pixels being zoomed in at 3200% for a while is messing with my head.
8 months ago
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Cameron Moll
Great eye, Chris. So tricky to get shapes and text centered sometimes, isn't it. I'll give this a 3200% look :)
8 months ago
Beyond the alignment, I feel like the x might need to be just a tad smaller as well, It feels a little to crowded to me, but that may just be personal preference. Might be worth giving it a try just to see if it adds a nudge of further improvement.
Otherwise, good use of small feedback details to improve upon the former.
8 months ago
thats hot
8 months ago
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Dain Kennison
Dying to see an "html5-y" animated version ♥
8 months ago