Leitura_n_500x500

Treasure Comp

by Neuarmy | June 11, 2010
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3 Responses

  1. Logo_copy Sumit Paul

    looks cool! but because of the comparatively larger gap between the last two paragraphs on the right, the space between rules above and below 'keep pace' looks strange. Doesn't it?

    over 1 year ago

  2. Pro Poster-heartofman Jonathan Bowden

    Really love the typography, rules, color choices, and overall look. But I would rework the multiple, similiar headline styles you have going on the right side. I needs more contrast in size, weight, and capitalization styling. And the spacing betweenthe first summary paragraph and body copy is a bit off.

    But overall this is really nice!

    over 1 year ago

  3. Leitura_n_500x500 Neuarmy

    There's definitely some inconsistencies in this early iteration. A lot of which has since been addressed - thanks so much for the feedback!

    over 1 year ago

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