Looking for some critique. Thanks
about 2 years ago
There's nothing really to critique. The only thing I could suggest, but I have no idea if it will look better is matching/lining up the S to the 2 on the left side. I love this otherwise.
Also, this may be brought up and you'd have to change it all. Currently the S is in the place of the 2 and vice versa.
2S isn't that same as S^2 unless S = 2.
@Flavuis are you saying you read the 2 before the S?
Ah! I understand it now. Now, I read the S first and then the 2. It makes sense now, but I'm still in highschool and I still have to deal with S^2 more of than others, so it's just common to have it the standard way for me, but now I understand what you were getting at. Yeah, it makes sense and I'd leave it how it is.
Leave it be, It reads well from top to bottom. Well done sir.
Nice! Have you tried it with a "mini-2" to shroud underneath the beginning of the "S" instead?
@Varick Nice idea... I'll have to try that.
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